Wednesday, March 10, 2010

1st fiction"The Gift of Magi"

Fiction “The Gift of the Magi”

The magi, as you know, were wise men--wonderfully wise men--who brought gifts to the Babe in the manger. They invented the art of giving Christmas presents. Being wise, their gifts were no doubt wise ones, possibly, the gifts will bring unexpected luck to people, who knows? Anyway, this is the Christmas gift…

Tomorrow should be Christmas. During the year, Della and Jim who were loving but poor newly married couples did not celebrate any festival, nor to send each other any gift. There were not any decent furniture and furnishings. The old carpet exuded smell of damp and creaking staircase which showed they live in a shabby loft. Economic depression, Jim’s salary was reduced just enough to maintain basic living. Tomorrow just was Christmas, the hostess of the poor family with a sigh who was contemplating how to celebrate this family’s first Christmas? Della stood up and over to the bed in a brown wood box where had her all saving under the bed.


One dollar and eighty-seven cents, in order to buy a decent Christmas gift for her beloved husband, Della had saved for more than six months, just one dollar and eighty-seven cents. She said to herself, too little money to buy the gift that she had been fancy which is a platinum watch chain, simple and plain in design, this is the only stuff might be worthy of Jim’s golden watch which is inherited from his grandfather, and it is Jim’s glory. Jim was her husband who was a low status of civil servant. Although he was an architectural genius and he did not meet any good opportunity to play his talent. In her mind, she has been convinced that Jim would become a great architect. Actually, Jim also has been unremitting efforts to this aim. This is the beloved husband of Della. Jim’s character just like that plain watch chain. It disclosed a kind of determined light under simply surface. Della was so love him.

There is no other way, and she had already been resolved. In front of the mirror Della carefully combed her beautiful long hair and said to herself in heart “by-by”. It seems to do a kind of prayer before farewell.

Walking in the street, Della felt that was unusual excitement. The time is Christmas Eve, every on were doing the final preparations for the grandest festival in a year. At this point, there were twenty one dollars and eighty-seven cents in her pockets, and she could not wait to go to that watch store which located the other side in the city. She seems to have forgotten the suffering of selling beloved long-haired. She just wanted to buy that watch chain quickly and worry about someone would buy in front of her.

That precious gift has been wrapped carefully using a silk handkerchief. With a pleasant mood, walking on the way home, Della heard that birds were singing, it was incredible in the cold winter in the cold Christmas. More than that, she also heard the whispering angles.

Yes ah, the winter has come and spring is following.

Della had completed the biggest wish the year, although she lost her most proud of the water-fall hair. For her favorite person, she believed that everything was worth it. She imagined in her mind that Jim looks like when he received this gift. Della smiled with satisfaction and happiness. She seems to presentiment that their poor lives will be a beautiful miracle.

Della bought two pieces steak and some sweet potato for their festival dinner. Last eighty-seven cents in her hand, this is all. It is time to go back home to prepare dinner. Della quickened the pace, and she also want to go back as early as possibly to save that the only remaining of the hair, at least, she want to let herself will not be too unsightly in the special occasion.


Walked, she met a ragged old lady who begged Della to give her some money and in her eyes were full of kind. Della did not reject her and gave all the money to her. “God bless you and angel will achieve your desire. Thank you, good people” the old lady said.

Penniless, Della returned home. Might be too tired, she felt asleep unconsciously on the rocking chair beside the dinning table.

She had a dream, there was a really angel who holding a flashing magic wand came to her and told her that good person I will restore your beautiful hair. In the dream, De la found her hair was restored and moved to tear. Della was awakened and just a dream but everything was too real, still full of tears in her eyes. She ran to the mirror and was shocked!

An Angel had really come……

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  2. This is my first assignment of this paper. there are lots of syntex mistakes and writen in Chinglish Way. Fortunately, i got many good comments from my classmates. That's great and exciting. This a hard process and can not be acrossed in very short time. I really enjoy it. Because i could feel that i am getting better. Giving up not my style^.^

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